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{Matariki day Today!}

Today is Matariki for Matariki we did Matariki Stars but its Nail art we used the hammer to hit the nail in the wood, next we rip the paper off later on when the bell ringed we all came back to class and once we sat down on the mat Mr Wiseman told us we could now do the fun part using rubber bands,and others! Once we were finished we would show Mr Wiseman and once he would tell us to blog we would go take a picture of the stars we created/Made from the rubber bands,and from on the wood and nails once we have finished we could chill or help some friends of ares or maybe help with the stars! The task was very difficult for
Me but i atleast got the hang of it! I did it little wrong a bit but i manage to finishes early until the next task from Mr Wiseman once Mr Wiseman told us to put are art in the middle to take
A picture of it some of us were not that done with the stars but they still managed to finish it for the picture when all the art was down in the middle of the mat Mr Wiseman would take the picture!.Finally once he took it we were all done! For the whole day!

Mason is acting like a play…
..Jake is the Police that will be acting like it’s all like a play…

Feeling; is like Sho About the Police trying to capture the Robbery:

Once upon a time There was a police that was named Jake he was a police and he was walking around having a great day ,
For having Delicious donuts while he was walking the bank alarm was on and a Robbery was starting until Jake saw he Quickly shouted’ oh No!. I must capture that criminel .He said he quickly ran to his car putting his donuts down until he got in. He started. the car and started driving and the bank. wasn’t that far away until he got there. He grabbed his gun and got out. slowly walking in raising his gun up
he then shouted saying..’Come out! And put ur hands up’ he said while holding .his gun but then he sees some people on the ground he then runs to them and evacuate them to go outside he ,then gets everyone out he then continues looking..for the robbery until he gets. to the safe he opens it gentle feeling..how well this go? Or how well will this end?. He then walks in the safe and sees the robbery! He then says..’ but ur hands up!’ he said to the robber. Robbery looks at him shocked to see that he’s been found to be one of the most dangerous criminals that’s been in the news before and has no other policies. have captured him before until now Jake was the first one to find him until this day the robbery was. arrested and taken to the police station by. jake! He was awarded with a gold medal and a trophy!…

Characters are: Jake Mason-the Robbery
The feeling is like: surprise or also like action and like a act with like Emotions

Also having shy sad Feelings or maybe like angry mad or confused? Action is like karma karma is like ELEMENTS OF DRAMA there are like;

STAGE DIRECTIONS AND DIALOGUE

There is also a love story to this as well!!

Once he got his medal he was so proud that he had. to celebrate his victory!!…
After he had a celebration he decided to go out with his other police friends until he was with his. friends he was going to a bar, it feeled like his first time until he got to the bar he saw a girl…that was beautiful he then went over to her and asked if she wanted to go out until she looked at him and said..’of course i would love to go out..’ she said he then said ‘okay then would you like to come and drink with us?’ he asked and she nodded yes Jake then taken her hand he then brings her to a table and sat her down he then sat, next to her they both started talking for awhile until the night comes and the bar was about to close jake and the girl got up and started leaving until Jake said..’could i have ur, number so we can meet sometimes?’..he said to her she then nods of course and gives him her number Jake saves the number in his
Messenger Jake turned around blushing a bit until he started leaving the girl giggles and started leaving also…the next morning Jake got up and called her, asking if she wanted to hangout she then said..’sure i would love to, maybe we can go to the fair?’..she asked and he said sure minutes later they met at the fair a few hours later. They were having a good time. A few days passed. They started to like each other and also being close until one day he asked her out. She was so happy she started yes they then became together and close being a lovely couple…few days later they were happy together
But one day he wanted to propose to her until Jake did while he proposed to her she goes
Emotional…like crying with happiness..she was so happy she couldn’t stop crying
Few days passed and it was their wedding day!! All of his friends and the captain of the police station they all came to his wedding also his families and cousin also her family until she comes out in a beautiful wedding dress she then walks down the alley with her bouquet of flowers and roses until she got there he was very happy also she was happy until the wedding begins

   The end

 Let me introduce you to the Characters first up is jake 

Jake; jake is a police his 35 his one of the best police man in the hole police station

Also Jake lives in New Zealand and his last name is Nakamura ..jakes birthday is one march 20th 

Mason-the Robbery: the Robbery named mason is one of the best dangerous criminal

Also no one have ever found him once until

The day comes and Jake and the Robbery is 39 and his nearly 40  and his birthday is on june 14th

 finds him at a bank stealing money and he lives in New Zealand as well. Also he had a gang and his last name is Tomsin.. 

The girl- is named olivia also her last name is virgo: so olivier  virgo is a girl from New york

But until she fled to New Zealand to meet her parents and visit them also she’s 33 her birthdays on april 18th 

Also don’t mind the name..  Jake: uses guns Mason_the Robbery: is using the same but using guns and knives 

The girl_named Olivier uses no weapon, she’s a normal innocent girl..

And locations are ..Mason_the Robbery  base the Police station and jakes house 

The bar the fair and the girl_named olivers house 

Also the bank is in the story if you can see it in their

Also New York and New Zealand so yeah that’s it!!..

Once upon a Time in a small Village called Burgan – There was a little girl she would have, Yellow hair with a red hoodie and a cape. Her mother her mothers Name is Sora. She was the Mother of the little red riding Hood one day they were at home. Her mother was out side doing the laundry  outside her mother would call her while she continues to do her laundry outside once the girl came her mother stand up and went to her

 She would say “little red riding food if you dont mind can you maybe drop this basket off to grandma’s House ?’ she said with a blink in the eye little red riding Hood nodded a yes she would take the basket and start skipping into the dark scary woods 

but luckily there was a path minutes later she was far away from the small village once she was skipping into the woods the big bad wolf sitting in the tree looking down at her seeing if he would finally have Dinner, he would lick his mouth with his tongue\

And rub his belly he would jump off the  tree and spy and hide behind trees hiding himself so he couldn’t be seen by little red riding hood until the big bad wolf jumped out behind a tree and ran after Little red riding hood, Little red riding hood would look behind her and scream scarcely she would run away with her basket she would run down the path fast as she can so the  big bad wolf can’t get her. Few hours later she made it to her grandma’s house but she didn’t know that it was the wolf that’s pretending to be her grandma,until Little red riding Hood handed  her Grandma the basket until…

…the big bad wolf..jumps out of the jumping towards Little red riding hood about to eat her until her real Grandma..came in with a Shovel and hit the wolf  to knock the wolf out…until Little red riding hood saw her grandma she would go over to her grandma and hug her few hours later she came back skipping back home back to the little village it seems Little red riding hood was okay! She was safe and sound

Her mother saw her and she would go up to her and hug her at the end..

Today is Matariki  for Matariki we did Matariki Stars but its Nail art we used to hummers the stars on the clear wood, next we rip the paper off later on Mr Wiseman told us we could now do the fun part using rubber bands,and others! once we were finish we would show Mr Wiseman and once he would tell us to blog we would go take a picture of the star we created/Made from the rubber bands,and from on the woods once we have finished we could chill or help some friends of ares or maybe help with the stars!

Today in Writing we learnt about the structure of a simple sentence.

There are 2 parts to a simple Sentence;

The subject and predicate inside the predicate is a verb a simple sentence is also known as an independent clause

because it contains one complete thought.

Here is my Example: The cat meows